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Classic elementary school essay paragraph: Were you shot?

2012-12-05View Original

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1. After helping the old lady cross the road, he asked, “Little friend, thank you. What’s your name?” ”He patted his chest and replied, “My name is Red Scarf.” ”I feel ashamed; I blame myself in my heart for having to rely on my grandmother to take me to school when I was young… 2. When writing about the person I love the most, it’s not my father or my mother – it’s that beggar uncle who, out of kindness, threw a bone to my dog. His kindness moved me deeply… At that time, writing about parents as the ones you love the most seemed like a trivial topic… 3. Today, I saw the old yellow ox belonging to the farmer working hard to plow the land. Its willingness to contribute its strength to the farmer is something we should learn from. Since the teacher advised us to learn from others’ *strengths on a wide scale, emulating the spirit of cows, sheep, pigs, and dogs has suddenly become very popular.   4. “Whenever I faced difficulties and wanted to give up, the images of Grandpa Mao and Sister Zhang Haidi would suddenly appear in my mind. Compared to them, my troubles were nothing at all.” I couldn’t remember what they looked like later on; could it be that I had some divine assistance when writing essays as a child?   5. “Today the weather is clear with no clouds in sight; we came to XX Park for a spring outing.” The first thing that catches the eye is the rockery. “Under the glow of the setting sun, we left reluctantly. I will always remember this happy and meaningful day! ”Actually, what bothered me the most on this day was having to write an essay while feeling constantly anxious… 6. “I love my home, and I love my great motherland even more.” ”“Watching the Five-Star Red Flag rise slowly, a sense of reverence welled up in me. When writing about patriotism, one thinks of the Five-Star Red Flag; elementary school students really have vivid imaginations.   7. “The aunt gave me 20 cents extra when I was shopping.” Suddenly seeing the red scarf fluttering on the chest, he stepped back. ”I lowered my head and “noticed that the red scarf on my chest was even brighter.”   8. “In my memory, there is a story that shines like the brightest star.” But when I look up, there are no stars at all... 9. “Countless revolutionary pioneers sacrificed their lives in order to bring us the happy life we have today; compared to them, I feel extremely ashamed...” “The Five-Star Red Flag was dyed red with the blood of martyrs.” ”Those bloody memories from childhood make one shudder at the mere mention of blood... 10. “Under the light of the candle, I watched the few strands of white hair on my mother’s head shining; her calloused hands skillfully mended my clothes, and I could no longer hold back my tears...” And so, all elementary school students across the country became tearful, while their mothers, who were just a few years older, turned into witches with white hair... 11. “How can one see a rainbow without going through storms?” Without extreme cold, how could one enjoy the sweet fragrance of plum blossoms? A classic among classics; every time at a critical moment, it serves as a catalyst for my perseverance. The teacher is amazed by its brilliance time and again… In fact, I still don’t know what the scent of plum blossoms is like. 12. Today is Teachers’ Day. Teachers are like candles – they burn themselves to light the way for others. They are the \"engineers of the soul,\" diligent gardeners who guide us in the right direction. But that day, Teacher Wang used all his strength to give us his last lesson; although he only taught us for one class before dying of cancer, we miss him so much. We will always remember him... Elementary school essays are so touching – many teachers die from serious illnesses like this... 13. “I found a penny by the road and gave it to the police officer. The officer praised me for being a sensible and good child.” After making the changes, I still had to add a sentence at the beginning of the essay: “The sun is shining brightly, the weather is pleasant, and I’m feeling very happy.” I’m truly proud of having been able to find even one penny when I was young, even though it wasn’t enough to buy a lollipop.   14. A touch of red among all the green – the teacher said this phrase is wonderful, as it highlights the red color in the center, making the red even redder and the green even greener. From now on, when writing essays, everyone should use a green tone with hints of red. The red color dazzles the teacher… 15. Xiao Hong is my deskmate; she has delicate eyebrows and big, expressive eyes that seem to be able to speak. As long as it’s about eyes, everyone’s eyes will appear bright and lively.   16. When writing an argumentative essay and examples are needed, Newton, Marie Curie, Edison, Marx – they all appear as shining examples. Even though often we don’t really know what they did, using them as examples gives it a sophisticated feel… 17. “The students looked at the clean classroom and smiled, wiping the sweat from their foreheads…” After the thorough cleaning, everyone started smiling in a silly, innocent way.   18. There are two jujube trees in the yard; one is a jujube tree, and the other one is also a jujube tree. Lu Xun’s classic works have also been read by many elementary school students; as a result, the yard was filled with peach trees, apple trees, grapevines… 19. “My grandmother is an elderly woman with white hair but a youthful appearance. She often tells me many stories, and she likes to accompany me while we count the stars. At night, when my blanket slips off, she always comes to help me cover myself up again.” It’s so lucky to have such a grandmother. ”After finishing writing, I couldn’t help but curse inwardly: Damn it, I’m not allowed to go out and play with other kids again… 20. When recalling their most unforgettable experiences, many elementary school students said that the thing they remembered most was once lying; “I promise I’ll never lie again. The punishment I got tonight is the last one I’ll have to endure.” Although I have made many vows, this time I mean it! ”And another essay full of lies was completed……
Reply #22012-12-05
Haha, they are indeed classics of their time~
Reply #32012-12-05
Since I never made things up when writing essays since I was young........... my scores on those essays have always been low. I remember the teachers’ comments always saying something like \"you need to express genuine feelings,\" and I used to wonder how one could write what is meant by \"genuine feelings\"...........
Reply #42012-12-05
It doesn’t matter whether I get shot or not; this one looks quite friendly. It’s the memories that that era has left us
Reply #52012-12-05
Although it bears the marks of bygone times, it feels that a considerable part of it is genuine, as people back then still had beliefs and ideals, even though some of those ideals now seem a bit unrealistic or even artificial. If we look at the language skills of many people these days, even without going too far back, just by examining some posts on HaiChuan, it’s clear that there are spelling mistakes and errors; sentences are not coherent, explanations are unclear, and even the titles of questions are written incorrectly. This shows just how poor the language expression and writing skills of many people are, skills that should have been developed during their time in middle school and university.

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