This year’s first perfect-score essay for the college entrance exam has just been released! It’s full of creativity!

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How can creativity help write a perfect score essay for the college entrance exam? It’s been almost a week since the exam, and the marking process is in full swing. The enthusiasm surrounding discussions about the college entrance examination essay from a couple of days ago is gradually fading, but today it will be reignited. Because this year, the first essay to receive a full score in the college entrance examination appeared!! Surprised? Unexpected? Want to see it? http://img.shanghainb.com/Upload/png/2017/6/14/16-41/8801.png This first essay that got a full score came from Jiangsu; yes, it’s the essay that required the topic to be related to \"vehicles\". Without further ado, dear readers, take a look! “Life is like a road – get on board!” Some say that life is like a road: sometimes wide and open, sometimes narrow; sometimes smooth, sometimes rough; sometimes barren, sometimes filled with beautiful scenery. Since life is a journey toward the unknown, it is those various \"vehicles of life\" that carry us through this long path of existence. Childhood: The scooter in my mother’s hands. I remember when I was young, my family was not well-off; I didn’t have a car like other kids, nor did I have a bunch of Barbie dolls. All that accompanied me was a pushbike, whose rear left wheel was tilted. Although I didn’t have as many toys as other children, the happiest memory from my childhood was when my mother pushed it, taking me to every corner of the town. Later, I learned to ride it around on my own; behind that scooter, there was always someone who hurried after me, worried that I might fall. Nearly twenty years have passed in the blink of an eye; I have grown up, and my mother is no longer strong. That scooter is still stored on the attic – covered in dust with rusty joints – but it was there to accompany me through those early, joyful moments of my life, and I will never forget them. This car is called Mother’s Love. Teenager: A greenish bicycle. After the age of twelve, we can ride bikes on the road. During those years, it seemed that bicycles were an essential part of every day: every morning and evening, I had to ride a bicycle to school; during each break between classes, the class would assign specific students to arrange the bicycles neatly; the topic we discussed most often with our friends was, “Let’s ride bicycles home together tonight!” Gradually, I started to develop feelings for someone, and a little blossom began to grow in my heart. On my way to school every time, I would stare for a long time at the entrance to his neighborhood, hoping to see him come out riding that blue mountain bike, so that I could pretend we met by chance and go to school together. Even if they can’t meet, secretly placing oneself and his bicycle together becomes the greatest happiness of the day. Once, even when my bike broke down, he took me home on his bike. Along the way, I was so excited that I almost cried. Although we haven’t seen each other since graduation, and his features have gradually faded from my memory, I am grateful to that boy for carrying my faint feelings during the most chaotic years of my life. This car is called Youth. Middle age: The striving car. There was once a materialistic woman who said, “I’d rather cry in a BMW than laugh on a bicycle.” ”Indeed, in this materialistic and flashy world of today, things that are pure and innocent are often cheap and not valued, while things that are hypocritical are usually expensive yet highly sought after by everyone. One should earn more and more money, so that their wallet gets fuller; one should move into bigger and more luxurious houses; and one should also get more expensive and high-end cars. No matter how much money one earns, it’s still just for eating, drinking, sleeping, and defecating; no matter how big the house is, there’s still only a soft place to rest; no matter how luxurious the car is, it remains merely a means of transportation. The reason middle-aged people suffer is that they are always unsatisfied. They live in luxury homes and drive expensive cars, but have forgotten how to live a poetic life. It’s quite sad to think about. Cars and houses are not everything in life; if one’s heart is corrupt, even driving around in a million-dollar car will not bring any improvement to one’s life. It’s time to stop and take a good look at the scenery in life. This car is called Desire. Elderly: A serene cart. When you are old, with gray hair, dozing by the fire, you might be sitting in a wheelchair. At this point, you may be alone, or you may have many descendants, but it is then that you truly take control of the vehicle of life on your own. You might drive this car alone, sitting by the bed and watching flowers bloom and wither, clouds gather and disperse; you might sit in this car, reflecting on your life with regret or joy; you might cry in this car, laugh in this car, and even spend your entire life in this car. At that time, you should have been the bravest and most calm version of yourself. Because having gone through the great ups and downs of life, nothing can hurt you, nothing can destroy you. This car is called Wisdom. It is these different vehicles that carry us through the long journey of life. No matter which one it is, we must cherish it. Because every person’s every journey is unique. This is the first essay to receive a full score in this year’s college entrance examination. What do you think of it? In the editor’s opinion, this is indeed an excellent piece; it focuses on the theme of \"cars\" throughout, follows a chronological order, has a clear structure with progressive levels, each level accompanied by its own subheading, and there is a coherent connection between the beginning and the end. Express the life insights from youth to old age through the metaphor of a \"car\", in one cohesive piece. The writing style is fluent and meaningful; it avoids slogans, clichés, and conventions, and can be described as an article full of innovation and creativity. http://img.shanghainb.com/Upload/jpg/2017/6/14/16-42/62865.jpg It is evident that among the numerous college entrance examination essay topics, candidates who possess innovative thinking and creative writing skills have a better chance of achieving high scores! Yet, while it’s easy to talk about creative writing, it’s difficult to put it into practice. What can be done? This requires consistent accumulation of knowledge along with training in creative writing techniques. The creative writing exercises at Qingda University* Bar are a training system designed to express new ideas in innovative ways. It can prompt students to engage in active creative thinking, stimulate their initiative in writing, and thereby gradually improve their writing skills. Learning* relies on persistence, and this is especially true for writing; as long as you keep at it, you too can write with great skill!