How do I translate such a sentence? Thank you
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In line with China’s development plans and industrial policies for the building materials industry, it is necessary to adjust the product structure of enterprises, improve the quality of their products, and meet market demands
In accordance with China’s development plans and policies for the construction industry, enterprises are required to upgrade their products and improve their quality in order to meet market demands.
In line with the development plans for the building materials industry and industrial policies, it is necessary to adjust the product structure and improve product quality in order to meet market demands.
In accordance with China’s development plan and industrial policies for the building materials industry, it is required to adjust the product structure of enterprises, raise the quality of their products, and meet market demands. In accordance with our country’s industry development plans and policies for building materials, it is necessary for enterprises to adjust their product structures and improve product quality in order to meet market demands.
In accordance with China’s industrial development planning and policies for the building materials sector, it is necessary to adjust corporate product structures, improve product quality, and meet market demands. Based on the country’s plans and policies related to the development of the building materials industry, companies are required to modify their product portfolios, enhance product quality, and satisfy market needs.
I think this is a good way to translate it; please help to take a look. According to the development plans for the building materials industry and industrial policies in China, it is necessary to adjust the product structure and improve product quality in order to meet market demands.
In line with our country’s Development Plan and Industry Policies for construction materials, it is necessary to adjust the product structure of enterprises and improve product quality in order to meet market demands. Pursuant to these plans and policies, enterprises must modify their product portfolios and raise the standard of their products to satisfy customer needs.
In accordance with the development planning and industrial policies for China’s construction material industry, it is necessary to adjust the product structure of enterprises, improve product quality, and meet market demands. Based on the development planning and industrial policies for the domestic construction material industry, there is a requirement to adjust the product structure, enhance product quality, and satisfy market needs.
The original text has some sentences with messy grammar. As required by the development plan and strategy for China’s construction materials industry, (we) need to reform the product structure and upgrade the product quality in order to better meet market demands.
When translating sentenceless sentences into English, it is necessary to add a subject (such as we need) or use a structure like It’s required that. Furthermore, the last three short phrases, “adjust the enterprise’s product structure, improve the quality of products, and meet market demands,” are not in a parallel relationship; the last phrase, “meet market demands,” represents the goal, and it should be expressed as so as to meet the market demand.
Strictly speaking, a subject is required, but many explanatory English texts these days omit the subject. Many are combinations such as verb + noun.
In accordance with China’s development plans and industrial policies for the building materials industry, it is necessary to adjust the product structures of enterprises, improve the quality of their products, and meet market demands. Based on these development plans and policies, we should modify the product structures within companies, raise the standard of their products, and satisfy market requirements.