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From top to bottom, the reactor can be divided into four parts: the upper space, the reaction and heat exchange section, the support layer, and the lower space. From top to bottom, the Reactor can be divided into four parts: the top space, the reaction and heat exchange stage with retaining wire mesh and ceramic balls, and the bottom space. The flow of the sentence needs to be improved. This post was last edited by niulijun117 on 2009-3-21 at 17:32
1. “separated into” – It seems more appropriate to use “divided into” for this context. 2. “four parts” sounds a bit like Chinglish at the end. Would it be more appropriate to do it this way: From the top to the bottom, the Reactor can be divided into four parts, including the top space, the reaction and heat exchange stage, the retaining wire mesh with ceramic balls, and the bottom space.
It’s better to use “divided into”. Additionally, it is recommended to use “section” instead of “part”. A possible translation is as follows: From top to bottom, the reactor can be divided into four sections: the top section, the reaction and heat exchange section, the support section, and the bottom section.
I agree with the translation from above. Also, in the original poster’s previous translations, “Reactor” was written in capital letters as well – is that necessary?
The translation on the 3rd floor is good. The reactor is divided into four parts; in fact, it would be better to say that the reactor consists of four parts. Try modifying it as follows: The reactor consists of four sections (from top to bottom): the upper space, the reaction and heat exchange section, the support layer, and the lower space. The reactor consists of four sections (from top to bottom): upper void, reaction/heat exchange section, support layer, and lower void. \"Space\" also refers to area, but in a broader sense. void has a stronger meaning of space within a container. This post was last edited by ludinggi on 2009-3-22 20:42]