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There are a few sentences that need to be translated – please help with that: Expected reduction in maintenance costs as a result of an increase in planned tasks, along with a reduction of current corrective maintenance by more than 53%; meanwhile, the cost of corrective maintenance rises by more than 50% due to the increased number of planned tasks. A risk-based proactive maintenance strategy was developed, with a clear shift toward condition-based maintenance. Comprehensive analyses were carried out through RCM workshops, FMEA sessions, and maintenance strategy evaluations. Last edited by *eshj123 on 2009-4-2 00:47
The author of the first sentence is truly talented; it took me a long time to figure out what was going on, and spending so much time on it became frustrating. :Lol, tentative translation of the second sentence: An asset-based proactive maintenance approach was proposed, which is clearly similar to (as opposed to). . . Approach) Condition-based maintenance.
1. It is expected that the number of tasks (for which maintenance costs are expected to rise) will be reduced, and more than 50% of the planned tasks will be adjusted, in order to cut down on the currently high maintenance costs, which exceed 53%.
2. An active maintenance strategy based on risk prevention was developed to provide clear indications regarding the status of maintenance; I’m not sure about the phrase that follows, “a clear shift towards”.
3. A comprehensive analysis was carried out on the critical states of the RCM process, as well as failure mode and effects analyses, along with considerations regarding the selection of maintenance strategies. I’m 90% confident about this sentence.
This post was last edited by 52Oll on 2009-4-2 at 11:05
2. An active maintenance strategy based on risk prevention was developed to provide clear indications regarding the status of maintenance; I’m not sure about the phrase that follows, “a clear shift towards”.
3. A comprehensive analysis was carried out on the critical states of the RCM process, as well as failure mode and effects analyses, along with considerations regarding the selection of maintenance strategies. I’m 90% confident about this sentence.
This post was last edited by 52Oll on 2009-4-2 at 11:05
Original poster, the sentence is quite difficult. Here is the translation of the first sentence: Expected reduction in maintenance cost with increase in the planned tasks and reduction of current corrective maintenance by more than 53%, given that the cost of corrective maintenance is more than 50% higher due to the increased planned tasks. With an increase in planned tasks, maintenance costs are expected to decrease； With maintenance costs 50% higher than planned, over 53% of current maintenance activities will be reduced.
I checked it; tentative translation: 1. Can’t translate it. Even after flipping it, it doesn’t work. 2. Develop an insurance payout based on a maintenance strategy to significantly change the current state of repairs. 3. In RCM (Reliability-Centered Maintenance) seminars, in-depth analysis is conducted on: the criticality of problems, the impact of failure modes, and the selection of maintenance strategies. This post was last edited by Flyupwards86 on 2009-4-2 11:27]
Give it a try. An expected reduction in maintenance costs as a result of an increase in planned maintenance tasks, along with a 53% reduction in current corrective maintenance – since the cost of corrective maintenance is 50% higher than that of planned maintenance tasks. Increasing planned maintenance tasks will help reduce current corrective maintenance by 53%, given that the cost of corrective maintenance is 50% greater than that of planned tasks. Doing this will reduce maintenance costs. Second translation: Increase planned maintenance tasks and reduce the current amount of corrective maintenance, as the cost of corrective maintenance is 50% higher than that of planned maintenance; this approach is expected to reduce maintenance costs by 53%. This post was last edited by ludinggi on 2009-4-2 12:46]
An expected reduction in maintenance costs as a result of an increase in planned tasks, along with a reduction of current corrective maintenance by more than 53%; the cost of corrective maintenance is more than 50% higher when there are more planned tasks. Try it: The goal is to reduce maintenance costs by decreasing the need for routine equipment repairs through an increase in planned tasks, given that the cost of such repairs exceeds 53% of the cost associated with planned tasks.
The expected reduction in maintenance costs comes from an increase in the planned tasks; current corrective maintenance can be reduced by more than 53%, while the cost of such corrective maintenance is more than 50% higher when compared to tasks that are part of the plan. If it is intended to reduce maintenance costs by increasing the planned tasks and at the same time cutting current maintenance efforts by over 53%, then the associated costs will still be more than half higher than those associated with the planned tasks
Why isn’t anyone paying attention? Where are the experts? Come on!
Expected reduction in maintenance costs as a result of an increase in planned tasks, along with a reduction of more than 53% in current corrective maintenance costs, given that the cost of corrective maintenance is more than 50% higher when there are more planned tasks. Maintenance costs are expected to decrease when the costs associated with planned tasks increase； With the maintenance costs (budget) for planned tasks increased by 50%, the current maintenance level (cost or volume) has decreased by 53%. In other words, the cost is 3% lower than the budget (based on past expenses). The difficulty with this sentence lies in the fact that it’s hard to figure out its structure; it is recommended that the original poster provide the entire sentence or paragraph so that further analysis can be carried out