Who is good at English and can help me revise this essay? Thank you!
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This post was last edited by Niuniu on 2011-5-26 08:07. As long as there are no basic grammar mistakes, that’s fine; thank you in advance! ==================================== I come from Petro-China. I love the company I work for and I love what I do. I am an engineer at an engineering company, and my task is to design 3D models of chemical plants. The reasons why I enjoy my job are as follows: First, I have designed many chemical plants, which have been built and put into use; it makes me very happy to see my designs come to life step by step. Second, in my work I get to meet people from various companies, who teach me new techniques and methods. Through technical discussions with experts, I improve my communication skills as well as my technical knowledge, and I believe all these advantages will be useful to me in other aspects of my work as well. Finally, the company I work for offers a great working environment, and my colleagues are very kind and friendly; they are always willing to help me whenever I face difficulties or problems. All these factors make me truly enjoy my job. ==================================== By the way, could you help assess what level this text is at? (kindergarten, elementary school, junior high school, senior high school, undergraduate degree...)
It’s about the level of seventh grade. But I’m only at an elementary school level; I’m afraid I might make mistakes when editing your text. :funk:
Reply to 1# Niuniu: It’s equivalent to the university level in China, and the kindergarten level in the United States
Typical Chinglish; graduated from university, rarely communicates with foreigners
My name is XXX. I am an engineer at Petro-China’s Engineering Company. My job is to develop 3D models of chemical plants. I enjoy my position and love our company. You might wonder why I enjoy this work. Firstly, I have been involved in the design of many chemical plants over the past few years – plants that are either under construction or already in operation. It’s very exciting to see our designs come to life step by step. Secondly, in my work I get to work with all kinds of friends and partners
I think it’s already written very well; at least it meets university standards