How to translate “carry with pledge of ...” (in a company profile)
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This post was last edited by lily99 on 2011-12-28 08:36. Each product comes with Dupont’s commitment to competitive performance and pricing, uncompromising quality, reliable deliveries, and competent technical support both before and after purchase. Please provide the translation for the text marked in red or the translation of the entire sentence.
Every product guaranteed by the “Dupont” brand boasts competitive performance and pricing, excellent quality, timely delivery, as well as strong technical support before and after sales. The above translation is for discussion purposes
This post was last edited by tbai on 2011-12-28 at 10:12. DuPont guarantees unparalleled performance and value for each product, along with precise quality, reliable delivery, and comprehensive pre-sales and after-sales technical support.
Each product comes with Dupont’s guarantee of competitive performance and pricing, uncompromising quality, reliable delivery, and excellent technical support both before and after purchase. In other words, every product bears a “Dupont” mark, which serves as a symbol of the excellent performance, reasonable prices, top-quality standards, timely and dependable delivery, as well as thorough pre- and post-sales technical support that Dupont offers.
Every product comes with DuPont’s commitment to competitive performance and pricing, uncompromising quality, reliable delivery, and competent technical support both before and after purchase. DuPont keeps its promises for each product: competitive performance and prices, top-quality standards, reliable shipping, and thorough pre- and post-sales technical support. For reference
Provide translations by others, so that everyone can use them to make improvements. Each product entails responsibilities, including competitive performance and price, reliable quality, adherence to delivery dates, and competent technical support for sales and after-sales service.
My personal translation insights, for mutual learning*: For each product, we offer excellent performance, reliable quality assurance, reasonable prices, convenient delivery, and technical support, both before and after sales.
I retranslated it, but I’m still not very satisfied. If anyone has a more appropriate translation, please feel free to share it. Each product comes with DuPont’s guarantee: competitive performance and price, top-quality standards, reliable delivery, and strong pre- and after-sales technical support. :handshake
Each product comes with DuPont’s commitment to competitive performance and pricing, uncompromising quality, reliable delivery, and excellent technical support both before and after purchase. Every product embodies DuPont’s promise to its customers: competitive performance and prices, a quality standard that is never compromised, reliable delivery of goods, and top-notch technical support before and after sales.
I think a literal translation works well; “it” refers to all the various safeguards mentioned later, and the translation provided above is excellent.