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Clouds spread across the sky like ink from an inkstone,
Does the wind stir the gentle waves to reveal Huangshan? The rhythm and tone aren’t quite right
Here is a rather interesting pair of couplets:
Upper line: White Tower Street – Blacksmith Huang, who heats up the furnace, burns charcoal, emits green smoke and blue light, and tempers purple iron; he works with his back to the north and faces south, working from east to west.
Lower line: Zhoukoudian – Scholar Qin, who recites Han dynasty texts, chants Tang dynasty poems, writes Song dynasty lyrics, sings Yuan dynasty operas, studies Qing dynasty history, and observes the cycles of winter, summer, spring, and autumn
Upper line: White Tower Street – Blacksmith Huang, who heats up the furnace, burns charcoal, emits green smoke and blue light, and tempers purple iron; he works with his back to the north and faces south, working from east to west.
Lower line: Zhoukoudian – Scholar Qin, who recites Han dynasty texts, chants Tang dynasty poems, writes Song dynasty lyrics, sings Yuan dynasty operas, studies Qing dynasty history, and observes the cycles of winter, summer, spring, and autumn
The wind spreads across the land, soothing the heart in spring. How about this sentence?
Dong Qi Ming, Xi Chang Geng; Southern Dipper and Northern Big Dipper – who is the one who can capture stars? Spring peonies, summer peonies, autumn chrysanthemums, winter plums – I am the one who ranks third among them.
It’s quite interesting; I only regret my limited knowledge and skills
Clouds spread across the sky like ink from an inkstone; flames shoot forth like swords, piercing the heavens (Long March 5)
This post was last edited by zbfyh on 2016-11-16 08:30: The clouds cover the sky like ink from an inkstone; thunder shakes the earth, creating patterns like floral screens; the wind blows over the sea, lifting the curtains
Clouds spread across the sky like ink from an inkstone; the wind stirs up huge waves, playing the melody of a zither. There must be wind even when dark clouds cover the sky: lol
The wind stirs giant waves, playing the strings of darkness – how about that?
Very good, thank you:handshake
Clouds sweep across the vast sky like ink from an inkstone; a gentle breeze over the blue sea reveals the dragons
It can be changed to: Wind meets the blue sea to seek the dragon; there is a hidden meaning in the first line, as ‘mo’ and ‘mo’ are homophones
Clouds streak the vast sky like ink from an inkstone; the wind blows the grass low, revealing cattle and sheep.
Overall, it’s okay; the short grass isn’t suitable for such a long day
Hehe, this of mine is just a silly way of doing things.
The highest level of dealing with poetry is to use ready-made verses at will. The wording is appropriate, with well-balanced antithesis