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Modifications to the guidelines: These guidelines may be modified to meet the requirements of the following: a) User-defined identification and numbering schemes that are not included in this standard; b) Computer databases used for record keeping; c) Microprocessor-based monitoring or control systems. When modified guidelines are adopted, they must be fully described and detailed in the user/owner’s engineering or design standards. Is this translation correct? Modifications to the guidelines: These guidelines can be altered to satisfy the following needs: a) Custom symbols and numbering systems that are not part of this standard; b) Computer databases used for storing records; c) Systems that use microprocessors for monitoring and control. The last sentence isn’t translated very accurately
Guideline modifications: These guidelines may be modified to meet the requirements of the following: a) User-defined identification and numbering schemes that are not included in this standard; b) Computer databases used for record keeping; c) Microprocessor-based monitoring or control systems. When modified guidelines are adopted, they must be fully described and detailed in the user/owner’s engineering or design standards. Guidelines can be adjusted as needed to satisfy the above requirements. a) Existing user-defined identification and numbering systems that are not covered by this standard; b) Computer databases utilized for storing records; c) Microprocessor-based monitoring systems. The user/owner’s engineering design standards must include a complete and detailed description of any modified guidelines that are used.
When modified guidelines are adopted, they shall be fully described and detailed in the user/owners engineering or design standards. When these revised guidelines are adopted, they must be described in detail and listed in the user/owner’s operational or design standards. In terms of word order, is this okay?
When modified guidelines are adopted, they shall be fully described and detailed in the user/owners engineering or design standards; if the revised guidelines are used, the user/owner’s engineering or design standards must provide a detailed description of all the items listed in (a), (b), and (c).