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1.In front of you, my explanations are always so inadequate. 【In your presence, my explanations are always so weak. 】 2. Don’t want to say I care; it’s just that my heart is out of control. 【I don’t want to admit that I care, but my heart just can’t be controlled. 】 3.Never had such heartache; when you took his hand and appeared, I felt it for the first time! 【I had never experienced such heartache before; it was the first time I felt it when you took his hand and appeared! 】 4. You said that performing is useful for a lifetime? 【Do you mean by ‘staying by each other’s side’ that it lasts a lifetime?】 】 5. Clearly not strangers, but still more than just acquaintances. 【They’re clearly not strangers, yet they act as if they are. 】 6.Once the pictures emerge, why love constantly but we will respectively. 【The memories from the past keep coming to mind; why do those who love each other have to part? 】 7.You’re not me; how can you know how sad I am? 【You’re not me, so how can you understand how upset I am. 】 8.I heard you had a very happy, relieved that I. 【I heard you’re living happily, which puts me at ease. 】 9. The distance of longing always appears to be unattainable. 【The distance of yearning seems always so far away. 】 10.In a bustling scene, an acquaintance, if possible, fades away after a brief encounter. 【In a lively setting, a meeting takes place; yet it feels like meeting for the first time, with a sad departure following. 】
Good love makes you see the whole world through one person, while bad love makes you abandon the whole world for one person. Good love allows you to see the entire world through one person, whereas bad love makes you ignore the whole world because of one person.;P
Nothing can ever replace you. Nothing will ever be able to take your place
English is beautiful; I’ve kept it all. The content is just way too cheesy. It gives me the chills.
Huh? I thought they were all incorrect sentences, so I brought them out for everyone to point out the mistakes. :L
I feel like poetry. Our love poems are also often fragmented and disjointed. So it doesn’t look like a complete sentence with proper grammar. But once it’s turned into a sentence, it seems to lose its poetic feel. Am I misunderstanding? :L:L
I don’t have that poetic talent; how about you write one?